any advice on this track?

The Volumes in general are a little low look into that. Try make the song a little more in your face kinda thing. Drums a little dead, or was that what you were going for?

I like it =)

- Idgeit
 
i'd bring both the gits down just a little.
more-so the one in the R

i know the bass is here, i feel like i'm being oppressed by the invisible man.
try to find a way to make it stick out more without turning it up.

it's good
 
Supercreep said:
I'm having a hard time getting past the shaky drummer.
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yeah. i'm going to be re-recording it using triggers. this is just a for now thing to put on myspace. nothing thats going to be anything other than an mp3...
 
I think the second guitar, 'solo' if you will, just seems to be totally random.. Just seems like its just been picked up and someones just played along not knowing what the hell theyre doing... It has some good ideas, i like the riff leading into the...chorus?verse? To be honest, i dont really know what its leading into.

Get some more power into it, tighten it up, get some vocals in it, take out the random guitar and youll have a decent track. Looking forward to hearing the new version.
 
Sounds like the whole mix is scooped - all low and high end, no punch in the middle, but maybe that's intentional.
 
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