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Good song-Thats kind of 60's vibe--almost reminds me of marshall crenshaw-nice classic changes and good melody, no complaints about the songwriting. The mix sounds pretty good to me as well-could use a little more ass-err i mean bass. The guitars--hmm...just an opinion but I would have used the tremolo a little more sparingly--maybe some verb on it to seperate it from the other guitar a bit,the recordings from the era this song emulates had tons of verb,I love it, verb everything!! lol j/k--the main rythm guitar might could use a little more bottom end--maybe not...maybe double the rhythym guitars panned L+R and use the tremolo for fills and such??? Hell I'm just rambling here-this sounds really good :).
 
When I wrote this I was 100% influenced by the Beatles which should be obvious (now I'm down to 90%). I agree that another rhythym would fill it out nicely. I really need to work on the bass sound. The tremelo I was only going to use on the "1" in each measure but I couldn't stop playing. You're probably right. Sometimes less is more.
 
Nice song and some good sounds in there. I like the vocals and the backing "ahhh ahhh's" a lot.
Stratomaster gave really good advice about doubling and L/Ring the rhythm guitar. I second that advice.
The tremelo part sounds great. I don't think it's over done.
I don't hear much bass. Maybe because you are worried about the bass sound you kept it low in the mix. Bring it on up.
Not to sure about the synth solo - but I don't like synth so that's a biased opinion.
I love the little outro. Nice touch.
 
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