Another New Song, "Downhill"

[Stereo Steve]

Well, I've taken to heart several comments the fine folks here have been gracious to offer on my last two submissions, and applied them to this song. Here's my latest original effort. Additional comments welcome; and thank you all...

http://soundcloud.com/rockview/downhill

 

[guitar zero]

I like the guitars, and that part of the mix sounds pretty good to me. I can hear the kick, but it sounds like it's all beater, kind of high and clicky. Doesn't seem to have much thump to it. Same with the snare. It's buried in the mix and doesn't have much thwack. Get a good thump in the kick that you can feel in the chest and fix the snare sound and I think this could sound pretty damn good.