I think the drums are wrong for the song but the song is otherwise really clever. I think samples would fit better than the electronic drums. Mixwise there's some pitchiness that might be worth fixing but not any real big issues I noticed.
Thanks for the suggestions and yes, I agree with you both. The drum track is something I just put together to see how the rest of the song would come together. I planned on changing them out. I also has an additional verse to add as well. As for the pitch issues, I'm guessing the vocals are what you referring to. Those were going to be replaced too.