Another Cover! Please criticize my Vocals!

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So here is my another cover "I'll be" :)



Please help me to improve!! :)
 
Dude, sorry but here's that age old reply. Sort your guitar out, it sounds awful. Honestly.

I couldn't listen to a lot of it because the guitar made my ears go funny, so I can't really comment on your vocals.
 
So, what have you learned and improved on so far by posting something every few weeks? I'm just asking rhetorically. You ask for help to improve but after 3 or so posts where people have advised you to sort your guitar out, it still sounds bad. You need to figure out what it should sound like. Pronto.

And just post one song in the mixing clinic, no need to post it anywhere else, we'll see it.
 
^^^what they both said, plus you are still straining your voice hard in trying to sound like the original artist. It literally sounds like you're....nevermind I'm not even going to say. It's just too forced.


Not that you will actually read or take this comment into consideration, since you're just harvesting hits.
 
+1 to all comments. I'm not going to listen, because I've given advice and I'm pretty sure has not been taken. Pearls to swine.
 
Im sorry guys! I am not trying to spam the forum, I just wanted feedbacks. Of course I am "taking your comments into consideration". I will do better next time and take time to experiment with mic placements for my acoustic guitar, sorry.
 
All the comments so far are true. Avoid "chewing" your r's. That's typically more of classical musician advice, but I think it applies here.
 
From a vocalist standpoint, I'm hearing a lot of pitch problems. You're flat and out of key. I found myself literally cringing during the chorus. If you're playing guitar while singing, STOP. Pre-record you guitar track so you can concentrate on your vocal performance.

As far as the mix...no clue, not my area of expertise.
 
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