Hey David,
The bass part on this is really well done, but I think I agree with the others that it is a tad too loud relative to the rest. Strings and synths and stuff sound good to me. The kit is a little timid sounding in terms of the tone of the kick and snare. I'd want just a little thud to the kick and just a little snap or crack to the snare myself. But my exposure to this kind of material is mostly limited to other recordings of yours I've heard, so obviously I don't have a lot of outside references to draw upon.
Well done my man.