an original you guys need to critique

tourettes5139 said:
Really good! I liked the acoustic sound, it was very natural (to my ears at least). Good vox too!
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thanks alot, i've uploaded the whole version. i've made the drums louder as i thought they where too low before.
 
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Nice sounds. Vocals sound good, but a bit "overprocessed". Meaning, too much FX at times. They sound echo-y. You might try and dry them up some. Drums and guitar sound very natural, but the vocals sound a bit odd, being done the way they are. I think you captured a good vocal sound, just try and fit it in the mix better. I think this song screams for just a straight up vocal sound. That's the only thing I hear that I would personally try and do different. Guitar sound is very good. Cool song also.
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Dogman said:
Nice sounds. Vocals sound good, but a bit "overprocessed". Meaning, too much FX at times. They sound echo-y. You might try and dry them up some.
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yeah, i added some delay, its funny, cause some parts of the vocal track seems fine, but others seem to unnatrual (like the very beginning).
 
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nice acoustic sound. Nice vox, but I agree with the other dog, might sound better without the effects. Mixing sounds pretty good. Catchy song overall. I like the fuzz on the solo, sounds good with the mood. NIce song ;)
 
i had a friend over to listen, he says that i need to get a compressor. he says that will make it so you wont need to use as many effects on the computer.

he suggested i use a plugin on the computer first, which he helped me with, and i must say, i cant believe i have been without a compressor all this time, this is amazing. i think i might go an buy one.

i post up the new tune with the compressed vocals
 
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