Am I in the correct path for mixing?

[ZoelVazra]

I am just learning to do recording and mixing. Here's the link of the song without vocal. Is this track mixing good? Any suggestion is heartly welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/zoelvazra/taal-ko-pani-backing-track

 

[ZoelVazra]

If the above link didn't work

View attachment taal ko pani new-01.mp3View attachment taal ko pani new-01.mp3

 

[TheAquired]

I didnt like the drums, the snare had this strange tiny sound on it which was tedious after listening to it for a while. Also the bass and kick drum on every beat or more doesnt sound like great musicianship. But that comes down to your style and taste.But Not a bad recording at all. I think more seasoned people here would be able to give better advice

 

[Armistice]

In spots, various instruments aren't keeping up with the pace... noticed it bass, guitar and keyboards... to the point of annoyance. There's also an incorrect note or two in there I reckon.

The volume dies at 1.20 noticably... you can even see it in the waveform.

Not sure how much of this would be noticable depending upon where vocals are added...

 

[iamsmash]

for your first time its a good effort - the best thing is to listen to music that sits in a similar range to that of your own and try match the mix as a best you can.

 

[Tobe]

I really like this, it has a perky casiotone "sheek geek" quality that is very original and contemporary. If you can find a vocal that blends well you might have the basis of something that rivals "They might be Giants".

 

[AlexG]

Please kill that tiny thing on the snare! I think it's not improving the song at all...

 

[JG96]

The synthy cowbell sound is very annoying I think it takes away from the song a lot. The snare has no body. It may be out of phase. The drumming could be a bit less kick heavy. Good start on the mixing. But there are a some strange things going on in the arrangement.