kerriobrown
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I thought these were great songs! Would anybody here be willing to critique my music? The one called “Six Feet Above Ground” is finalized, and the other song (“Ride Like Arrival”) is a more energetic rough draft I need to know if is worth pursuing. Note that since the latter is not normalized you will have to turn it up more.
Here’s the link if you’d rather skip my back-story below: http://www.myspace.com/kerriobrown
Recently I decided to get back into writing music because I thought I have something worth sharing. After completing my first song, my response from others was more muted than I expected. I got a lot of “I like it” and “It’s good”. The mark of a good song is if people listen to it again on their own and that’s not happening.
Anyway, I’ll no doubt continue to write, but I’m not going to sacrifice nearly as much time if it’s not worth it to anyone else. In particular, I’ve added a very rough draft of a second song here (Ride Like Arrival), for which I need to normalize, replace some vox, reduce some FX and the bass, and change some drum fills. But I won’t plan on finishing it if it sucks.
I had convinced myself that maybe no one seemed that interested because they are not big music fans in general. The other fantasy I’ve had is maybe they’re not getting it, no one really likes a lot of the music I listen to either. But given the response to the 2nd song so far I’m starting to feel the more probable scenario is that there is something unlistenable about these songs that I’m not getting. Maybe they are cliché, or just not that interesting in general.
I’m all for having someone else perform the vocals and/or have a professional record/mix/master the songs if I thought that was THE answer, but I won’t waste the time and $ if that will turn a mediocre song into a just decent song. I also feel like I have better songs than these, but if that just means decent, then I’d rather concentrate on things I know I’m good at.
Thanks for the help! Please be honest since I’d rather find out now rather than later after squandering other talents that others agree I actually have!
Thanks again,
Kerrio
Here’s the link if you’d rather skip my back-story below: http://www.myspace.com/kerriobrown
Recently I decided to get back into writing music because I thought I have something worth sharing. After completing my first song, my response from others was more muted than I expected. I got a lot of “I like it” and “It’s good”. The mark of a good song is if people listen to it again on their own and that’s not happening.
Anyway, I’ll no doubt continue to write, but I’m not going to sacrifice nearly as much time if it’s not worth it to anyone else. In particular, I’ve added a very rough draft of a second song here (Ride Like Arrival), for which I need to normalize, replace some vox, reduce some FX and the bass, and change some drum fills. But I won’t plan on finishing it if it sucks.
I had convinced myself that maybe no one seemed that interested because they are not big music fans in general. The other fantasy I’ve had is maybe they’re not getting it, no one really likes a lot of the music I listen to either. But given the response to the 2nd song so far I’m starting to feel the more probable scenario is that there is something unlistenable about these songs that I’m not getting. Maybe they are cliché, or just not that interesting in general.
I’m all for having someone else perform the vocals and/or have a professional record/mix/master the songs if I thought that was THE answer, but I won’t waste the time and $ if that will turn a mediocre song into a just decent song. I also feel like I have better songs than these, but if that just means decent, then I’d rather concentrate on things I know I’m good at.
Thanks for the help! Please be honest since I’d rather find out now rather than later after squandering other talents that others agree I actually have!
Thanks again,
Kerrio