The first thing it reminded me of was some of the avant-garde stuff that was put out in the 60's, but without the "high dollar" production. People would put out the strangest stuff, and it would sell... sometimes 10,000 copies or more. Obviously heavy drugs were involved.
As the Beagle said, the mix needs a lot of work. it's pretty much all over the place. The vocals might as well have been in Esperanto... you can't understand them at all. The theme is too repetitive, it needs something else as a bridge or chorus. Otherwise, it's like a jam session that goes nowhere.