Odi
Lost in Lucidity
PorterhouseMusic
Well-known member
That was really cool! Dig it. Fun, interesting song. Mix sounds solid. Cool lyrics. I dig the lead vocal - great voice. Well done!
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TripleM
Well-known member
Great vibe and feel to the song. Well played/sung.
I think the rhythm guitar could use a little less low end and low mid. And a bit more bite. Like roll off the lows up to 120-140hz or so. Notch out a bit around 300 hz. And then a wide-ish, gentle boost around 2.5khz.
The drums are a little far back in the mix. Especially the snare.
The bass lacks a little definition. Not bad tho.
I like the little extra guitar licks that come in during transitions.
I think the rhythm guitar could use a little less low end and low mid. And a bit more bite. Like roll off the lows up to 120-140hz or so. Notch out a bit around 300 hz. And then a wide-ish, gentle boost around 2.5khz.
The drums are a little far back in the mix. Especially the snare.
The bass lacks a little definition. Not bad tho.
I like the little extra guitar licks that come in during transitions.
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OSHC
Active member
Nice composition. Great vocals and I love that lead guitar part with delay!
Odi
Lost in Lucidity
"Welcome to the machine..."
