All Alone

[Irwin abrigo]

This is a song I composed, arranged and produced and would like to have some feedback. It this a good song, is this a bad song. Do I need to work some more on this song?



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[VomitHatSteve]

Some of the highest synth notes are pretty shrill.

It's got kind of a video-game vibe overall. It kind of sounds like what would be playing during a concert scene in a Sierra adventure game. Although, the melodic synth would probably be somewhat more vowel like in a game.

 

[Big Thier]

Well, your sounds sound quite amateur. I don't know if it's your samples or the mix, or both. Your snare and kick have no power. Try layering multiple samples, for example: 2-3 snares. I too got an "arcade room" vibe from it. Is your bass panned dead center? If not, do it.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Some of the highest synth notes are pretty shrill.

It's got kind of a video-game vibe overall. It kind of sounds like what would be playing during a concert scene in a Sierra adventure game. Although, the melodic synth would probably be somewhat more vowel like in a game.

I wasn't thinking games when I composed this song VomitHatSteve, but your thoughts were well received my me. thanks for the reply.

Irwin

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Well, your sounds sound quite amateur. I don't know if it's your samples or the mix, or both. Your snare and kick have no power. Try layering multiple samples, for example: 2-3 snares. I too got an "arcade room" vibe from it. Is your bass panned dead center? If not, do it.

Hi Big Tier, About the snare and kick I did turn them down so I can relate to what you are saying here.I do appreciate your advice and will apply it in my up coming recording. Thank you very much for your input.

Irwin