After what felt like years...

[bozmillar]

oh wait, that's because it was. I finally finished this song.

I think the kick might be a little over-thumpy, but other than that I don't hear anything standing out as needing fixed. Usually when I think that, it means I'm wrong and need more opinions. So please rip this apart.

 

[nzausrec]

Just a little weak vocals without the bv's at the beginning. Good death voice. Good old voice from the past insert.
Genrally needs work. Some melodic bits make it work esp on those bvs and multi vocal tracks - they fill it out and give it melody/harmony.
Not into the weaker sounding vox. Some quiter parts breathing in but on an outward vocalised note. The screaming u do and the chorus bits along with the gats sounds definitely better.