Afin - Smooth & Warm

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it sounds good, but the ending is badly edited, far too abrupt for my tastes.
 
The synth that comes in at 1:15 is too low in the mix. The fake kick/snare sounds, well, fake.
Not sure what you're going for here - is this an instrumental dance tune, or ....?
 
Btyre2013 said:
it sounds good, but the ending is badly edited, far too abrupt for my tastes.
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Thanks mate. Well probably you are right, maybe some day I will return to this project and edit this ending ;)

mjbphotos said:
The synth that comes in at 1:15 is too low in the mix. The fake kick/snare sounds, well, fake.
Not sure what you're going for here - is this an instrumental dance tune, or ....?
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Hm.... what you mean "too low"? Should I add more higher frequencies on this synth or something? In my opinion it's a hip-hop beat, wait for someone to spit on it :D
 
It sounds nice but there was nothing there to hold my attention for 1:51. It just mills along and nothing really happens. I flicked through it.

:thumbs up:
 
Afin said:
Thanks mate. Well probably you are right, maybe some day I will return to this project and edit this ending ;)
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The mixing clinic is usually to get suggestions on how to improve your mix, so a little confused on this comment. Does this mean you are finished and you just wanted us to hear your final mix?
 
Afin said:
Hm.... what you mean "too low"? Should I add more higher frequencies on this synth or something? In my opinion it's a hip-hop beat, wait for someone to spit on it :D
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Volume is too low.
 
@DM60

Ofcourse I wanted to hear your suggestions guys, because I'm trying all the time to improve my mixing skills, that's why I'm posting my stuff here.

@mjbphotos

Thanks, now I get it :D
 
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