I posted in another section and was told i'm way to breathy when i sing so i tried to fix it and will continue to do so because i now hear it when i look for it. i was to concentrated on so many other factors like texture, tone ect... that i missed the fact i sound like i have asthma. was was hoping some of you would give your opinions on my singing and tell me what you think. please let me know of any tricks or things i could do to improve on my singing. I have better "performances" than this, i just wanted something fresh. i sang the first take normal and then the second take i try and not sound so breathy. the breathy take i did in one recording the second recording i did like 15 takes on... Thank you View attachment broken knees f.mp3