Acoustic rock - New song - feedback requested

[jm67]

A new song I recorded this weekend. The guitar solo at the end is a bit of train wreck so I may re-record that part. But I'd appreciate any feedback on the mix.

My Dog by jmDC | Jm DC | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[jm67]

Bumping once - still looking for feedback

 

[Chili]

It's got a heavy CSN vibe. Nice. I like how it starts out kinda disjointed then pulls together. I think the overall tone of the mix fits the song perfectly. I wouldn't change a thing. I like the dark guitar for the intro, is that a resonator? Good harmonies. Some spots are pitchy with the vocal.

If this was 50 years ago, you'd have a hit on your hands.

 

[jm67]

It's got a heavy CSN vibe. Nice. I like how it starts out kinda disjointed then pulls together. I think the overall tone of the mix fits the song perfectly. I wouldn't change a thing. I like the dark guitar for the intro, is that a resonator? Good harmonies. Some spots are pitchy with the vocal.

If this was 50 years ago, you'd have a hit on your hands.

Thanks for the listen. I think I may retrack some of the vocals to get the harmonies a bit more exact. Not a resonator - just a cheap tinny Yamaha capoed. It’s definitely a throwback; then again half of what I hear on playlists are purposely retro, so maybe what’s old becomes new again.

 

[mcmac74]

I love the intro (and verses) on this. The 'tinny' guitar and understated drums are ace...yes retro but very much of the time for folk/ indie crossover stuff. The bridge to chorus sounds like you vocal should be about to hit a soaring melody but doesn't go there...more subtle but as Chilli says, you're searching for notes and it meanders a little. Overall I really enjoyed it though. ??