acoustic guitar instrumental - looking for criticism

[oneup009]

thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=431024

 

[JonathanRay]

I loved that! I can just imagine some vocals, bass, and drums! That'd be awesome. Great song man.

 

[SnakeDog5050]

Beautiful sound man. Love it Not only does it sound good recordingwise, but good song too. Very relaxed and enjoyable.

 

[Monkey Allen]

Well done. Love acoustic...those little lead bits that came in while the rhythm was cut sounded a little weird.

Keep on truckin'

 

[earworm]

real nice, i'd love to hear some vocals on this,
what kind of mics and preamps did you use?

 

[oneup009]

thanks everyone.

my set up is

guitar-> sm58+another mic (not sure what it is) -> tascam us-122 -> cool edit pro

 

[Radiohead0709]

nice man, the acoustic sounds very clean, good sounds!

 

[David Katauskas]

Very very cool. This track is screaming for vocals. There were several different potential melodies in my head while listening.

 

[oneup009]

yeah, i get that a lot. i've never tried writing or recording vocals though. maybe i will eventually.

 

[packratlouie]

Nice soundin tune there, I'm enjoying it man.

I'd recommend not having those little lead bits that come in, panned so hard to the right; sounds a little jumpy.

I'd like to see what you could do with this.