A World Through A Window

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nopoetic

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tripping on clouds as I dust off the sheets
its 3am and I'm awake for the night
I can't resist as my arms drag me up
with my keys following suit

its just late enough to see dew settled out
asleep in the grass, frozen in my breath
I'm climbing through restless, an empty midnight
I've missed the stars again in a fog of regret

this simplistic view from the top of my house
nailed down tight, keeping rain from our beds
I'm all alone and you're all dreaming
I wonder where, I wonder when

I love my habits
they keep me alive
thinking in changing patterns
as I struggle to catch up

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its different i guess, im not entirely happy with certain lines, others i think are perfect. i think the idea here isnt too vague.
 
as before, i think its hard to judge certain things by just lyrics. id love to know and hear those work around a song. the words are cool enough, i just find it hard to figure out how a song would sound around them
 
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