cello_pudding
Well-known member
so my recording things have been broken for a good while now, but i was excited to at least get together a mixer to record this little song.
i don't know how cohesive it is, how cohesive it needs to be, or anything. i like the chords, the melody at times, and the lyrics are adorable in places.
www.myspace.com/johnmarkhatfield
it's "so young". The song itself is about 2 days old, so there's a lot of kinks, but a lot of potential i think
this flooded teem soon breaks
away form its usual bend
i'm forced out, and i'm pulled in
to an earth sunken stream
and two paths have run their course
we upsprung to the sun
at water unknown we point our big toes
i'm on a word search and i'm failing to flirt
with my pockets out-turned
and i'm slightly concerned
but with God as my Cyrano
soon we will both know
underneath the hope and doubt
see the green we found a sprout
we would rise to the light
to wrap our vines around eachother
wrap our vines around eachother
too tight, too tight,
no light, no light
we need to rearrange
chorus...
we are so young
we are so young
we are so young
i don't know how cohesive it is, how cohesive it needs to be, or anything. i like the chords, the melody at times, and the lyrics are adorable in places.
www.myspace.com/johnmarkhatfield
it's "so young". The song itself is about 2 days old, so there's a lot of kinks, but a lot of potential i think
this flooded teem soon breaks
away form its usual bend
i'm forced out, and i'm pulled in
to an earth sunken stream
and two paths have run their course
we upsprung to the sun
at water unknown we point our big toes
i'm on a word search and i'm failing to flirt
with my pockets out-turned
and i'm slightly concerned
but with God as my Cyrano
soon we will both know
underneath the hope and doubt
see the green we found a sprout
we would rise to the light
to wrap our vines around eachother
wrap our vines around eachother
too tight, too tight,
no light, no light
we need to rearrange
chorus...
we are so young
we are so young
we are so young