a tune i did last night

[struberg]

->> a tune <<-

plz tell me what u think of it. there has been no mastering or stuff, so plz tell me what is missing / what needs to be fixed in the mix.

txs in advance,
mark

 

[mixmkr]

it started out cool...lacking a little high end....then got better...then the tempo fell apart...came back together...fell apart again... then realized that THIS was the crux of the tune. Some SERIOUS potential for being a nice head-triip song. A little wacky here and there, like I said with the tempo, and the one theme kinda made this more into a sketch. Expand on it, I'd be very interested in hearing where it goes.

 

[mixmkr]

on listening again...the timing "is" there...right on the edge however... I think the echo stuff on the drum pattern might have influenced my decision earlier.

 

[struberg]

great txs, mixmkr!

i'll try to spread the delay/fx stuff on the drums away from the middle to make space for the snare and the guitars. I hope this will clear things up.

I'll do this when i'm back home.
It's 9 in the morning here in vienna, and i'm currently at work (a bit tired).

 

[erichenryus]

i like the electric, too far back in the mix though. don't like the rythm section. that's just a matter of style i think though.