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hello.
i like the off kilter vibe.
i think the drums are too thin sounding. if they are programmed, i think you need to add more powerful crashes, and a lower toned snare with more initial crack. also, there are times when the kick sounds out of time.
and i think you should try to add some separation between the bass and guitar. as it is, it sounds a little muddled. maybe take some lows out of the guitar.
i don't mind the distant vocals, but if you want it poppy, i would bring them more to the front of the mix.
once again, i like the song pretty well. just my opinion.