A new song - uptempo, upbeat

[Tom Paul]

Here is a song I am writing called "Tanner Road". There are just 2 parts and I will fade it out when I get it finished. I am finding that I write better lyrics when I go at them as kind of a stream-of-consciousness thing and quit trying to be literal. Do you think this is done?



Tom

 

[YXrecordings]

Hey,
Great job,
the following is only my opinion and only according to my taste:
I think you could play more bass i notes on Bass, there is too much repeat of the Mid range bass notes if you know what I mean, so for me it kinda got annoying with that mid noise,
In terms of production I Recommend more extreme panning on some parts like in the transitions at 00:35 were that melody plays , everything is kinda in the centre, This is only opinion based though. I also recommend you do not fade out, you got a great ending, again opinion based, I think the age of fading out is over ...