A little Rap-Rock for the masses

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are you normally a rap/rock outfit???

the scream came out great!!!
so i wont comment on the "rhymes"..lol
but the whole mix sounds sorta like im hearing it thru the wall in another room..the levels are ok ..just something in the final mastering...like there is no highs ...maybe someone with more experience can better vocalize what im tryin to say.
i thought the song was ok...it didnt knock my socks off or anything but i did listen all the way through..
the drums sound sprety good too...really all the instrumentation is fine its just the blandness of the mp3...maybe its the conversion...did it sound fine before you converted it???


jamal
 
It has always sounded a little weird, especially in the low frequencies, like on my monitors the bass drum sounds pretty good but on my computer the bass is way too boomy.

thanks for listening, I like the song, but it needs more development hopefully we can come up with a good melody to repace the rap.
 
Since I am a big newbie when it comes to recording aspects I will only comment on the song itself.

Good voice, I totally dig the screaming. Rap needs to change or something, the lyrics aren't bad, but the rap is way too "vanilla". If you keep the rap get some attitude behind it.
 
took the words right out of my mouth.
yo lemme take a crack at those verses homie, i got mad skilz yo! :)
great tune other than the rap performance.
garrett
 
Good Hook...your verse spittin style is a little weak,but the scream is great,I also do a little hip-hop but I am so fuckin' white most people just get embarassed.The song is really good..just bring the rawcuss when you rhyme,really spit it,what helps me is if I watch a mobster movie I dunno something about the attitude.Cool lyrics and bass line...oooh but that second verse is just...err...oh,I know...yo,that shit's whack,yo...I like it but then again I'm white as wonder
 
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