A little feedback

[dedicatedlist]

I've been out of music for about 4 years.. how you ask, well I could go into it.. but bottom line, it was the worst thing that I ever did. I just now made a new track that I really like, but it doesn't punch the way I'd like. Any suggestions?

 

[ssscientist]

Good 'un! Don't quite understand what you mean by 'doesn't punch' --- maybe mastering would give it that final polish, but I think the contrast between the confusion of the middle part and the almost pastoral beginning and end are quite nice...

 

[JUSTTIGHT]

Are you sure you meant to post that in the Hip-Hop section. Add some real drums that might do it for you