A few tracks that need feeback

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Popnfrsh24

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Hi All!

I'm Joey, and I have been playing guitar for the past 9 years. I recently got into recording songs with my Ipad, and I was wondering if you all could give me some feedback. The first song is a cover that I did by the Beatles. It's called "I'm only sleeping". Tell me what you think! I recorded it using garageband on my Ipad, so I am pretty limited on what I can do with effects. It's a pretty raw sound...no EQs on the vox, and the main vox only has slight compression and some reverb.

https://soundcloud.com/lighthouserock/im-only-sleeping

I also make funny songs. I'm pretty proud of this one, and I think it has come out sounding pretty good for being on the ipad! Tell me what you think! It's called, "Waking up my Roommate".

https://soundcloud.com/lighthouserock/waking-up-my-roommate

Any feeback is appreciated!

Thanks!

Joey aka "Lighthouse"
 
Couple of things, song sound good, your vocals probably need some of the room taken out of it, EQ down the upper areas, not too much, just get some of the room out of it. It also seems like you are not comfortable singing in that high a range. Seemed a little strained. Harmonies felt a little out of tune. If you went back and redone those, see if you get a better cut at the song.

Good effort.
 
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