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A CHILD OF THE CITY -- Revised mix
Some many years ago, I recorded a number of songs at Sage & Sound Recording Studio in Hollywood. I’m linking one of those songs for critique, and it requires a couple of bits of “backstory”. (“A Child of the City”)
First, we recorded the basic tracks of this song, which were reduced to a stereo mix. This includes the drums, synth bass, keyboards (electric and acoustic piano), and vocals. I never finished the song at the studio, because I really had no idea of what I wanted to do to fill it out. The result was a relatively flat rendition of the song, without much appeal to me.
Since I’ve now been getting my own little rat hole of a studio going, I’ve come up with what I think are some good ideas, and I more-or-less finished this one out (at last).
I should mention that the vocals are a little pitchy here and there. It’s not really the singer’s fault. The song was placed at the top of her range in many places, and the dumbshit songwriter (that would be me) didn’t know enough to be able to transpose things to a better key for her. She’s a trouper, though, and charged into it anyway, with what I think is a pretty good result overall.
I’m submitting this for 1) general critique of everything or anything (not sure if the brass I added is too loud or not, etc.); and, 2) to find out whether I’m getting the straight goods from my monitor set-up. When I was getting the studio assembled, my initial work tended to be very bass-heavy, and that’s about when I discovered HR.com and “bass traps”(!) When I installed the bass traps, the difference was striking.
At this point, I feel like I may finally be getting an accurate sound out of my monitors, but I only have a couple of systems upon which to test the result. Sounds reasonably good in the car, so-so on my cheapo bedroom system, and way too bassy on my computer speakers (which are way too bassy on everything).
What do you think? Suggestions?
https://soundcloud.com/diaphonedog/solid-blue-sky-a-child-of-the-city
Here is the second mix of this song:
https://soundcloud.com/diaphonedog/a-child-of-the-city-mix-2
Some many years ago, I recorded a number of songs at Sage & Sound Recording Studio in Hollywood. I’m linking one of those songs for critique, and it requires a couple of bits of “backstory”. (“A Child of the City”)
First, we recorded the basic tracks of this song, which were reduced to a stereo mix. This includes the drums, synth bass, keyboards (electric and acoustic piano), and vocals. I never finished the song at the studio, because I really had no idea of what I wanted to do to fill it out. The result was a relatively flat rendition of the song, without much appeal to me.
Since I’ve now been getting my own little rat hole of a studio going, I’ve come up with what I think are some good ideas, and I more-or-less finished this one out (at last).
I should mention that the vocals are a little pitchy here and there. It’s not really the singer’s fault. The song was placed at the top of her range in many places, and the dumbshit songwriter (that would be me) didn’t know enough to be able to transpose things to a better key for her. She’s a trouper, though, and charged into it anyway, with what I think is a pretty good result overall.
I’m submitting this for 1) general critique of everything or anything (not sure if the brass I added is too loud or not, etc.); and, 2) to find out whether I’m getting the straight goods from my monitor set-up. When I was getting the studio assembled, my initial work tended to be very bass-heavy, and that’s about when I discovered HR.com and “bass traps”(!) When I installed the bass traps, the difference was striking.
At this point, I feel like I may finally be getting an accurate sound out of my monitors, but I only have a couple of systems upon which to test the result. Sounds reasonably good in the car, so-so on my cheapo bedroom system, and way too bassy on my computer speakers (which are way too bassy on everything).
What do you think? Suggestions?
https://soundcloud.com/diaphonedog/solid-blue-sky-a-child-of-the-city
Here is the second mix of this song:
https://soundcloud.com/diaphonedog/a-child-of-the-city-mix-2
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