Not a bad effort - but I absolutely hate the drums - very cheesy-sounding especially the toms and snare.
A little too heavy on the effects - even for an 80's style. On top of it, while you hear the reverb, there's still no dimension or depth to any of the mix elements.
The vocal sounds completely out of place with the rest of the mix. You need to have cohesion between all elements to make a mix sound "together."
Like I said, not bad - but you could still take it up a few notches......