1st clinic post

Not too shabby...good use of samples. Mix was solid overall. The only thing that became a little annoying was the hat.

The vocals were pretty good but could perhaps use a bit of distortion during the verses.

Definately good work!

Slackmaster 2000
 
yeah, if the beat is not just one loop, try adding some dif velocity to the high hat, it's acting like a metronome, a super fast one:D

Good mix tho, killer guitar tone, too

AL
 
Took me a couple listens to get into the drums - but I think I like. It sounds almost like brushes during the chorus. If you could make the drums sound a little crisper (sorry - don't have any tips) you would have something really awesome and unique. Actually, you already have that, but it could be more pronounced.

Really cool guitar stuff at the end. Wouldn't mind hearing just a little of that same kind of stuff a little earlier in the song just as a hint of what's coming at the end.

Good job!
 
good song! It sounds decent overall.. I agree that the high hat got annoying, maybe you could lower it at least.. nice guitar sounds and vocals! the harder the singer pushed it, the better it sounded to me..
 
Guitars sounded good. Interesting vocals. I think they fit.

Can't say I liked the song much. It kind of offended my gentle sensibilities ;) :D. Just not my style, but good job none the less.
 
Fairly nice production.......I'll have to go with Jagular about the style but that's strictly personal preference. As for the production.....it has some reallt good sounds in it and a BIG sounding guitar. I could use that guitar sound sometime......;)
 
Your neighbors must have 911 on speed dial!!

Love this giant continuous creshendo.

Lead guitars sounded really great.

I haven't got a clue on how to critique this kind of music, seems like it's untouchable.

Great work

GT
 
I liked the song. I didnt care for the drums though. I think live drums would sound great on this. Vocals fit the song..... Some cool soundtrack bites....Its got some creativity for sure. I could never really get into tecnometal. Like Rammstein or Zombie. Change the drums and its more like Pantera or Overkill..?? But who am I... I use a drum machine also-lol....
 
I liked this A Lot!... and agree about the HH.. what sabb said, and lower it a bit might do the trick. The vocals and gtrs are great. good beat...I give it a 91
 
Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. These guys bring me .wav files of trax they create in fruity or reason to which we add live guitars, bass, and vox. The hats were part of the stereo drum track. I really was not able to tone them down. I just got kinda used to them over time. In the future I think I'll insist on at least kick, snare, and hats on separate .wavs where I can treat them individually. Once again, THANKS!
 
With the exception of the noise in the beggining, a bit much
hi-end (bordering past krispy), and a db or 2 boost on the lower end, this jammy was strong! I thought the voc's got lost in the middle,but after a 3rd play realized it was conducive to the song!
Kit provided more than ample direction while gits stated their point forcefully staying on top w/o overwhelming the entire perf.!
With an Eq tweak here, a hi-cut tweak there, this mofo is ready for mass production!

This is some serious Punk-Funk-Humpin' jammie you got!
 
Really good, loud recording. Very nice job. No sure what the porn movie soundtrack stuff adds to the song, but that's a personal taste thing. Couldn't understand a lot of the words so for all I know it fits perfectly.

Maybe a little more energy at the high end than necessary. Just a suggestion. Heard a little pop at 1:14.

Overall a real good job.
 
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