That's cool. Like the chorus parts, funky. Little derivative in parts, but what isn't. I listened Lo-Fi so can't really comment on the mix. From what I could tell it sounded balanced, and I like the drum sounds to. Reminded me a bit of Thin Lizzy/Winger/Whitesnake. The guitar sounded a little abrasive, but that could be the mp3/lo-fi.
Nice work.