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    Critique my Sonic Landscape!

    I'm a newbie so I can't really give you the technical feedback you're looking for... I just wanted to say it sounds terrific to me, the guitar parts seem to blend together but I can still hear everything that's going on, and I enjoyed listening.
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    You - New Version

    Wow! Great song! Here is my constructive criticism. It's very general. You are a really good singer. In my opinion, this song would be better served by more emotion, less technical exactness in the vocal. I'd rather hear some mistakes, some growling, and more expression. Nice work!--Jessica
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    Help with finding a stomp sound?

    Anyone have advice for how to find a stomp sound that will fit my song? I'm kind of hoping to pay just a few dollars for the specific sound I need, rather than downloading some huge pack. Here's the song I want it for: https://soundcloud.com/jessicazin/the-noise I don't think making it myself...
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    Come Die with Me AKA Faithful Kind of Morning

    Very cool song! Charming and modern. I really like the tone of your voice. Awesome: "almost all notes are out of my comfort zone..." Here's my constructive critique: When you're doing the spoken part, in some parts it seems too calm and collected compared to what is being said. Like the "idiot"...
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    New song "The Noise" feedback appreciated!

    Great, thanks Jnke and Frits and TripleM. Very helpful. I think I agree with every one of the points both of you made. This forum is so helpful because I didn't hear those things before. I did humanize the snare but I agree it doesn't quite match. I really need to learn how to manipulate EQ, I...
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    Orayo -- Newest piece

    Great song! I really like it. Here are my suggestions... I don't like the way you said "three" in the beginning. When the lead vocal is singing without the backing vocals, it sounds too thin and unadorned. (Sorry for my lack of technical terminology!) I think it would sound better a little...
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    New song "The Noise" feedback appreciated!

    Thank for any advice you can give me to improve it! I'm very new to this, and this is the first song I've completed since getting monitors. --Jessica https://soundcloud.com/jessicazin/the-noise
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    A really ridiculous newbie problem with playing a cd through monitors

    This is so stupid. But I can't figure out how to get a cd, inserted in my computer, to play through my monitors. The sound will only come out of my computer internal speakers. I've got the monitors plugged in to an audio interface or preamp or whatever it's called (Focusrite Scarlett 8i6) and...
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    Total newbie question but it's also mixing...

    So I just got my first pair of monitors (Yamaha HS 50M). Up till now I've been mixing on headphones. This is really a question about mixing on headphones. I think that even with my monitors, I'm going to probably do some mixing on headphones because of my family/privacy/humiliation concerns...
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Thanks for all the feedback. I did just get some Yamaha HS50M monitors from craigslist and just set them up and tried them today. I guess it does make sense that having different tracks with different types of reverb will sound funky. Going to have to think about that, and about a vocal booth...
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    a new song

    I think this is a really good song. I love the arrangement and the melody. The lyrics...well, I'm an atheist. But I still really like it. I would say that the biggest weakness in my opinion is the drums because they sound so fake. (Sorry!) In particular the last cymbal in the drums loop. In my...
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Thanks for the encouragement Frits! That Kimya Dawson song about Corey Haim et al. totally inspired my 80s song. You nailed it. I think I was kind of overcompensating with my "fake fake fake" comment, I'm defensive about doing everything with software instruments...Specifically what I meant is...
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Thank you bouldersoundguy and miroslav for the suggestions. I will try singing close to the mic and see how that sounds. I will research the bass traps idea. I read that you should tape blankets to the walls. Is that a good idea? I kind of like the idea of making it as dead as possible and...
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Also, don't freak out but I'm mixing with headphones.
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Here are some photos of the basement. This is the biggest room of the house, although the ceilings in the family room are somewhat higher. I know I've got some severe limitations here, I just want to do the best I can. Also, I can spend a few hundred a couple times a year probably, without my...
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    Recording vocals with SM58 and a 500 sq. foot basement...sound treatment options?

    Hello, I really hope someone here can help me! Here is what I do: I arrange and "record" in Logic Pro 9 (ALL software instruments using a midi keyboard). So the only live audio recording I need to do is my voice. My voice is just adequate-sounding...I am planning to do a lot of double tracking...
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    Hi, I wanted to get some tips on how to improve my singing voice.

    I think you're on the right track. My advice would be, 1. Make sure you are in control of the rhythm. Sometimes it seemed like you came in a bit too late or too early, kind of fighting the beat of the song. 2. I like the gravelly aspect, but I think you need more of a clear tone added to this...
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    Rats and witches...

    I totally totally love this. Too bad about the subconscious melody rip off. That's the WORST! My suggestion is that the song would sound more driving, moving along if there was a louder rhythmic guitar behind everything going STRUM strum-a-lum-a-lum-a, etc. I just think it would improve it a...
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    Please help me improve this mix! "This Is Not a Snipe Hunt"

    "I'd have expected something slightly angrier from Iggy Town." Thanks, that cracked me up. Super helpful feedback about the low frequency stuff. Now I have a place to start. Also several people had the same comment about the verses should be spoken more naturally. I think I will do that. This...
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    Please help me improve this mix! "This Is Not a Snipe Hunt"

    Thanks for the comments, I appreciate the honesty. I agree with the specifics like the gong problem, and the vocal shortcomings, but I feel like the bigger problem is it does all sound like it's coming from a wool blanket far, far away! What is up with that! I mean, if the midi instruments are...
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