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  1. PoeticIntensity

    New Original Metalcore Mix

    Sadly, I've gotta say that this tune has exactly the same problems as the previous one did. Drums sound washy and basically suck the power out of the song. Guitars sound muffled, too. Now, this would be okay, if there was a more prominent instrument or vocal that was clear, because the focus...
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    New Metalcore Mix - Implementing Advice

    Hmmm... Guitars sound good, while the drums sound a bit washy. The whole thing sounds a bit muffled - not sure why. With stuff like this, I want my face to explode by the sheer force of it. Rhythm and syncopation are good, but ya just gotta up the clarity, I think.
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    Acoustic Rock original- "Pura Vida"

    Wow... Sounds good. Great, in fact. I don't have much to say, actually. During the song, because I was trying to find a nit, I found myself focusing on the mid-range jangly-ness of the guitars, and thought they sounded a bit loose, but .... that's really it - and that's such a small...
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    Factory Joe

    Very interesting / unique song, Trip. I found myself smiling through almost the whole thing. Some nits: Something weird with teh vocal freqs. Sounds like some upper-mids that are tweaking a little here and there. I'd try to find em' and tame em. Same thing with the drums. Compression is...
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    Am I Crazy?

    I found myself quickly wanting to turn this up, and the more I did, the better it sounded. Great sound, RAMI. Your drums sound incredibly tight. Love em' on this song. The beat / syncopation with the different instruments only add to the flavor. Great stuff! If there was a critique to be...
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    HOME TO YOU new version!!

    Hey Mike and Gerry! Glad to hear you guys crankin' out the songs again! I love the laid-back feeling of this song, and it works quite well. Would you consider putting a bit o' verb on the guitar(s)? For some reason I kept being pulled into how dry the guitars sound. Not sure if that's just a...
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    It's time for church...

    I'm not entirely sure what I meant. I just listened to the song again through some different headphones, and it sounds just fine, as far as the vocal brightness levels go. Sorry about that.
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    It's time for church...

    Hey Bob! Thought I'd take a listen... Sounds good overall.. Something about the vocals makes me twitch a little. Maybe they're a little too bright? Not sure. The choruses definitely are a bit muddled vocal-wise - a few of the voices are off-time, but doesn't sound bad! Thanks for sharing.
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    ALICE with drums

    Not too shabby, Ray! Sounds like something akin to Tom Petty (which is a good thing in my book). If it were me, I'd work on the vocals a bit more - make sure you're getting the best take possible (sounds like you're going to get a new singer, anyway), and then compress the vocals more, so they...
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    Home To You

    Man, it's been forever since I've been here! Been working overtime on my new studio. Anyway, I'm glad this was my first listen back. My first impression of the song is ... sparse. The mix I think is pretty good. Drums seem to lean to the right for me. Also, the hihat is pretty hot in the...
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    Collab with Michael McDonald and Kate Bush

    Dude.... Less than a minute in, I forgot I was listening to a track that wasn't produced in a multi-million dollar studio. I *love* the groove of this beast. I got helplessly sucked into the groove, and thereby all critical thought was rendered useless, so I can't comment on the mix ... even...
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    New mix

    Dude... Can't comment on the mix because I'm sick as a dog, my ears are filled with gunk, and my speakers suck. But what I can say, is - I really enjoyed this song. I've gotta go listen to my Project 4 album again...
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    Windride (original)

    Much better. If it were me, I'd also add a bit of reverb to all the drums to set them back even more. Other than that, great stuff, man! Thanks for sharing. Yup! You're correct on all counts.
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    Windride (original)

    Hey! Not too shabby. I'm not feeling well, so I'll make this brief. The shining stars of this piece are the guitars, no doubt. I find myself fixating on that darned hi-hat closing off-beat. It feels like I've crawled up into that hat and am listening to the guitars from inside. That's an...
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    The Jeffersons - my tribute to Sherman Hemsley - RIP

    Yup! It's still 4 months away, but... here's what we've got so far! There's also this that explains a bit about what the build is going to be.
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    The Jeffersons - my tribute to Sherman Hemsley - RIP

    Way, way, way too late in this, but I don't get around to doing anything other than building my new studio and working to be able to pay for it. Anyway... This song rocked on all levels. Snare was awesome, as well as everything else. I'm gonna listen to this at least 10 times before I fall...
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    In My Heart - how's this mix?

    Sounding pretty good, man. On the initial listen, I'm thinking that the whole thing could use a bit more reverb. Not quite sure why, and it might be my sleeplessness that's talkin', but other than that, it sounds great, man!
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    FS Like New Echo Audiofire12 Firewire Interface

    Well, after almost 6 months of sitting, the Audiofire 12 is now sold. Glad its new home is with someone from this forum. Happy tracking!
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    FS Like New Echo Audiofire12 Firewire Interface

    heh... I'd definitely love to help you out there, bud. Let me know what I need to do to move this awesome piece of hardware! :guitar:
  20. PoeticIntensity

    the faster we go...

    I'm so flippin' tired, I forgot how to type. Suffice it to say, "Yes". I love it. I love the groove. If I might suggest anything in this sleep-deprived stupor, it'd have to be to ease up on the gain a bit on the overall mix, but just a hair. Sounds a bit too compressed for the song, me...
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