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Can't really make any comments on mix or production as I'm listening on my phone(yikes!) I definitely dig the the track and genre. A little A.I.C with the crawling, seething feel... Yes, i like this Will give it a proper listen later this evening and provide more thoughts. Great job

Still a work in progress, try to fix one thing six other get screwed up. All comments welcomed Thank you Box

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Ray Thank you !! I think you are correct, more/better eq-ing would help out a lot with separation, clarity and Falls in line with what Jam mentioned as well. My pseudo mastering for lack of better term consists of smashing the master pretty hard. Not to a brick wave form but what I call the...

I was working on the mud in this mix and I agree it still needs attention. The guitar tone had/has a lot in the 300-400hz range that I suspect is one part of the issue. The bass tone(which I was not really happy with) is the other part. When combined its like quick sand. Think it could clean up...

Was going for more Ufo then hair spray, kind of 80's ish i guess. I think i may upload tracks and post to "mix this" sometime soon. I would be grateful for any thoughts and/or ideas for improvement. Thank you Box

You are correct with your suspicions regarding what my monitors relay to me. At the moment the room my system is set up in and how the system is set up leave just about everything to be desired. I try to listen to track on different systems in different places then go back and try to correct...

work in progress . Would like the vocal harmonies to sound better. My 10 year old daughter knocked her part out of the park Any and all thoughts welcomed. Thank you Over God by WrisTLocK | Wris TLoc K | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Can't argue that I've received much more advice then I've provided back to the community. I'm here listening often but don't feel I have the knowledge to offer. I will make concerted effort to throw my 2 cents in moving forward. No disrespect ment. Thanks for the tune up.

Critique my tune, recording and mix Track : ALL LIES - OCTAGON OCTAGON-23.mp3 - Google Drive

This song was originally an attempt at a country tune. I'm not sure what happened to that idea. Struggling with lyrics and even more so with vocal performace I called upon the one and only, Sammydix down in Atlanta, Georgia Sammy kept my title but wrote his own lyrics and of course performed all...

Better for sure : ) For my taste the heavy guitar tone needs some work. It seems a bit flubby? I think the vox would sit better and the song overall would gel better with a different guitar tone. Just my $0.02 and personal taste A tone similar to what you got for Diary of a Madman would be...

Got to echo what the other two guys offered already. I think the song represents the genre well but need to be able to hear it Like said above remix trying out the mentioned ideas at least, then definitely repost it

Thanks !! Thanks ! Bass is real .... I've listened to this on many different systems and haven't felt the bass was too much on any of them. Maybe just personal preference. What did you listen on ? Thank you for commenting !!! Nice :) Thanks !! I think your right, a bit more meat it...

Rock Guitar Instrumental Hendrix/Beck inspired Just for fun DOG OFF THE LEASH by WrisTLocK | Wris TLoc K | Free Listening on SoundCloud

I'm listening on krk rp-5's which aren't positioned well in an untreated room. I used a psp preset for a pseudo master and I believe it had some high end boost right in the range you mentioned 5k-8k maybe. Going to revisit mix tonight. Thanks jimi

The Soundcloud version that's playable in the original post is the 1st mix. The link to reverbnation brings you to the current mix. Here: FIRE FLIES by WrisTLocK | ReverbNation

Thanks for the critique NEW MIX FIRE FLIES by WrisTLocK | ReverbNation I think I fixed some of the above mentioned issues : ) possibly created new ones : ( THOUGHTS PLEASE.........THANKS

I think the majority of the brightness harsh or otherwise is coming from my pseudo mastering attempt.

Hey thanks for the detailed comments jonlint. You touched on a lot of things and I'm in agreement with most of them, a few things plugin wise I will have to research as I'm unfamiliar with the plugins themselves and their usage. Got a lot to dive into and explore. Thanks again bro. (BTW I heard...