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  1. jm67

    ramshackle - beck cover

    Yep, I like Mix 2 better - it's sounding quite nice now. I've always been a Beck fan although I don't own all his albums. I really like Blackbird Chain from the new album, and I've always had a soft spot for Nobody's Fault But My Own from Mutations. Anyway, well done!
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    ramshackle - beck cover

    I really like the playing and arrangement, but the guitars sound a little muddy (too much low middle across the board). I agree the vocals sound a little dry - more reverb would probably help. Adding a little warmth to the vocal would probably help also. In this case I might be tempted to...
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    comfortable mind

    It sounds great - I really can't hear much of anything that needs improving. Really nice work.
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    Dreamless [Mostly Acoustic]

    The mix sounds good to my ears. Maybe the kick drum could come up a notch, or have a little more attack? Otherwise I can't think of anything to change. There's a tiny bit of fret buzz at 0:10 that's noticeable only because it's so early in the song. To be honest the song doesn't do much...
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    Something Between

    Really like the song - and the vocals sound great to me. I like the doubled vocals and harmonies. Overall this is great work. I concur with the posts above about the intro. I like the train noises ok, but if you want the "low-fi" to "full fi" effect, I think you need to make the intro...
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    New Piano Ballad: Seagull Song

    Thanks PDP. Yeah, somehow BFD2 drums aren't really ideal for this type of song. They seem more suited to Zeppelin-like tracks rather than stuff that's mellower. But it's what I have ;) Of course I could shell out some more $$ and buy the jazz kits, but I can't really justify it for one song...
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    "I Don't Need No Doctor" A blues cover..

    It's nicely played, and I really like the quality of your voice. It's got a good laid-back vibe. There are a couple of off-pitch moments in the singing that could be fixed (e.g. 1:50, 3:20). How did you record the guitar? I wish it had some more grit - like a bit of distortion, and a...
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    New Piano Ballad: Seagull Song

    Thanks ido1957 - glad you liked the song. I'm a sucker for major7th chords... ;) The vocals were recorded with an AKG 420 through a Tascam 1800 (via XLR). I did add the "ozzifier" stereo effect to the vocals (mixed low) so that might be taking some of the warmth out of them. But I think the...
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    New Piano Ballad: Seagull Song

    Thanks for the listen and feedback RayC. Sounds like I should drop the bass level & tame the <100Hz, especially in the beginning. The guitar is put through a Leslie effect, but I could mix in some pre-FX input in order to minimize the obnoxious stereo panning. I haven't heard the Whitlams...
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    New Piano Ballad: Seagull Song

    I put this together over the last couple of weekends. It was supposed to be a happy, upbeat song but it came out as a depressive piano ballad! Ah well... I still think it's sort of pretty. These days I only write songs about birds and politics; and then I delete the ones about politics. My...
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    "Funkafied"

    Wow - great playing and a really nice mix. Clean and spacious. Sounds fantastic to me. It's sort of like the Dead ditched Phil Lesh and hired Stanley Clarke! Only thing I wasn't crazy about was the sound of the drums (snare & hat), but I get that the electronic drum is a style choice here.
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    Steppin' Out -- Newest WIP. First song done in Sonar X3

    Great tune - tons of energy. I can't wait to hear it when it's complete. My critique is that it sounds overcompressed. The horns are a little synthy, but I think they suffer from the compression more than anything else. They sort of flutter in and out of the mix on the long notes, rather...
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    Acoustic Guitar Recording

    To me it sounds okay, but a little boxy, with a prevalence of low-mid frequencies. I might cut around 100-200 Hz and slightly boost around 7-10kHz. Some of the peaks sound a little harsh too. But it's really going to depend on what else is around it in the mix. Is it just going to be guitar...
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    Biggest problem with this song

    I like the vocals, but the song itself didn't really grab me. It feels like one song (sort of an energetic rock'n'roll number) up to 1:40, then it transitions to a sludgy metal riff. I guess I'd have preferred to keep it simple, extend the early vibe, and make the performance looser and less...
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    Still under construction song called "Joy". Feedback?

    I liked it... made me want to build a campfire or go sailing. The seagull & ocean effects are cool. I'd bring up the lead vocal and especially the intro harmonica. Handclaps are tough to mix. Maybe someone has a magic formula - I've never had much luck making them sound good. You might...
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    Mustang Sally Cover - any opinions/suggestions appreciated

    It's a nice sound, but agree that the drums (as opposed to the ride) should be louder. I also wish the arrangement built a bit more during the song - it's pretty much the same chord voicings & instrumentation at the start and the end. If you re-record, could you have the 2nd rhythm guitar...
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    good time

    That's a great laid-back vibe, and I love the vocalized trumpet. Perfect! Great playing too - the bass felt very much in the pocket. There was something about the guitar tone I didn't like - felt a little too dry, like it was DI straight into the board. I wanted to hear the "room" a little...
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    What Potholes?

    Sounds like it could be a really good song, but concur that it's crying out for some bluesy Sabbath/Deep Purple/Mountain kind of singing. Right now it's a little plodding (mostly quarter-notes with a heavy beat) - but I can see a wild vocal line making this a killer track. The guitar solo you...
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    Final EP track.. If you listen to this I'll buy you a strawberry daiquiri.

    This sounds great to me. I listened on headphones (AKG K240's) and each part was clear and distinct. The vocals sound really good - with a distinct Radiohead influence.
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    The Bottom of This Ocean

    The acoustic guitar is the dominant element in the mix. I would bring the vocals more up front. But... the vocals are also a bit wavering and pitchy at various points, and there's some auto-tune sounding vibrato at 1:40. Even as a demo, I'd work a bit more on getting the vocal performance...
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