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    song for critique

    I've just recently written this one... and I'm kinda letting it sit for a while just to make sure I still like it... But I'll see what y'all think. Close your eyes Sit in the Dark Forget the lies And just let it start Maybe if you can just forget for The night of passion Calm your nerves, quit...
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    song for critique

    yeah hard rock... there's a gread syncopated driving melody in drop D that goes with that. I wrote it about religion but I try not to limit the subjects of my songs... if someone else draws something else from it what place do I have to tell them that the way that they feel is wrong? Thanks for...
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    hoping to get some feedback from you all about my songs

    well I listened to the first song on there... and while it's not my cup of tea musically, I really do like the lyrics and I think with a little tweaking that song could sound really good. I like your voice by the way too. It reminded me of what Roger Waters would've sounded like if he'd been...
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    song for critique

    ok... I'm new here, but from what I've seen I really like it here. I'm a youngster but I've been writing my own music for about 6 years now... unfortunately the only outside opinions I get on my lyrics is from my band members who happen to be my best friends and not critics. So I was hoping to...
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    Err .....vague [nEed iMPuT]

    don't feel bad! I do the same thing... what sometimes helps me is to put the song down for a while and come back to it... it's kinda like sex, you blow your load, then you need a recovery period.
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