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  1. Stratomaster

    Past Life I still couldn't sing

    Well i make no claim to my ears greatness to strangers but sure the vocal sounds in pitch to me, the melody is fairly simple and there were no outright clunkers, my ears are confident enough to tell me to type that. I like the verby sound and the simple mix, someone might just let this pass as a...
  2. Stratomaster

    No Love - alternative pop

    Sounds great-nice full sound. Excellent vocal track. Guitars sound solid. I hear things i would have done different but i believe you're getting the sounds you want. After listening about 10 times i hear two snare hits that i thought were a little off and interrupted the flow a bit for me, i...
  3. Stratomaster

    Folk Song

    Thanks for listening and the nice comments. I agree Triple M that there's a few words that are obscured, i did high pass the acoustics a bit, the guitar itself is kind of boomy, a simon and patrick woodland cedar, the bottom end is what i like about the guitar, but the voice is also in a lower...
  4. Stratomaster

    Kilby Jail

    I listened to the revamp-Great song, great playing. The mix could be a little brighter, but i think it sounds pretty natural as is. This sounds like a winner to me! I like that it's hard to tell when it was written and also it makes me wonder is this Americas original music before blues and...
  5. Stratomaster

    Folk Song

    So this is a short little folk song idea i've had for a while, and finally got to writing some lyrics and recording. It's very short and simple, acoustic and voice with a string part during the bridge. Recorded with an octava mc012 on guitar and a rode nt something on vocals, both through my ua...
  6. Stratomaster

    Put Your Hand Inside the Puppet Head - TMBG cover

    I think the vocals start out in a good pocket for the first 10-15 seconds and then get swallowed up a bit. Sounds very tough to sing but the enunciation seems pretty clear, good job on the vocal. The drums seem a bit loud to me-they are dominating the mix. I vote to turn up all the vocals until...
  7. Stratomaster

    Melange de la Chauve Souris

    Yeah sounds pretty excellent to me, separation is very noticeable in your recordings. Guitar work is excellent. I like the tambourine-pretty agressive in the mix but it works-sounds like a rattlesnake tail at times : ). If i had to make a mix critique i would say there seems to be some mud build...
  8. Stratomaster

    Should I have added more to the low end

    I would vote yes it needs a bass element-I can hear a stand up (double) bass line happening as i listen...Other comments...the scratchy noise in the beginning seems too loud and panned too far, a record that noisy and the old style jazzy guitar would imply a more mono source, the sound itself...
  9. Stratomaster

    Making L O F I HipHop VIDEO!

    cool video-I like all the sounds you're getting-the kick and snare are punchy and i like the tone of they keyboard. The high hat riff sounded a bit off or at least unnatural to me is my only critique. If you ever need a guitar track give me a yell, would be cool to play over a nice groove like this!
  10. Stratomaster

    New Taylor, New Recording

    Congrats on your purchase! I agree with triple M that the acoustics were getting buried in that low midrange area. When the electrics dropped the acoustic held its own, the playing is tight and even as expected : ). I like the tune, would work well instrumentally or with a vocal. Acoustic...
  11. Stratomaster

    Orbit

    Thanks for listening and commenting people. As far as specific comments-it seems the general consensus is to distinguish the guitar parts more in the first section. I agree-i was thinking the third guitar would just help build the energy level without standing out, but everyone seems to hear...
  12. Stratomaster

    Nujabes Type Beat (Critique and Feedback appreciated)

    It sounds nice like i could hear this in a commercial or a movie scene. As far as criticism i looked at the ticking clock while it played and that flute part takes about 15 seconds to complete than it just repeats over and over till about the 2:30 mark so it got repetitive to me in a hurry. Some...
  13. Stratomaster

    Again

    Sad to see a song with 0 comments about to fall of the page...And this is excellent so i'm glad i listened-is this you singing? if so that is some excellent singing, big time-i like the sounds all around-the piano sounds great, bass? not sure if it's keyboard bass but sounds tight-drums sound...
  14. Stratomaster

    Your Sympathy - alternative pop rock

    I like the song, sounds great- mix is very reasonable volume compared to the last 3-4 things i listened to in the clinic and i'm enjoying the dynamics-the vocals are really driving the song-excellent singing and melody. Drums particularly the snare seem less in your face than some of your other...
  15. Stratomaster

    FIRE FLIES - mix help (Stoner, Grunge, Metal)

    I like the tune, tight and heavy sounding. Something about the vocal effect bothers me-like i'm hearing a short delay that seems to work against the vocal(right speaker?). Excellent guitar playing, the tone sounds big, not a very dynamic tone but sounds appropriate. Bass guitar seems under...
  16. Stratomaster

    ?

    Sounds great-i like the am radio sounding opening, you know something is about to hit you in the face and it does. Timing sounds on and good tones, and i can say that my response took me 5 times longer to type than it took to listen 5 times to your piece. I like the drum sounds for vst-even the...
  17. Stratomaster

    Orbit

    Greetings- Here's a little tune i threw together using some addictive drums loops. I made the video with windows movie maker using public domain clips. I wanted to tell the story of a space launch gone wrong, but i thought it was in bad taste so kept the video positive in nature. The music was...
  18. Stratomaster

    tumor

    Hey man- I remember your name from the "old days". Cool tune, nice frantic drum part-i like the bass part and good tone. Guitars sound good-the right side guitar sounds a bit dull, but the part is coming across just fine. Interesting when the jazzy piano comes in, that was unexpected...You...
  19. Stratomaster

    Walkin' Around

    You posted your song and proceeded to bury it yourself into the middle of the pack. Mix sounds great to me, though i'm not a fan of the drums they sound obviously fake which clashes pretty harshly with the vibe of the tune. Vocals sound great and well performed-guitars sound very good. Bass...
  20. Stratomaster

    New Song - Windmill

    I like this. The mix may be a little mid rangey but i don't think it interferes with your song coming across. I like the rhythm section sound, can't tell if the drums are real or not which since you say they are a VI is a good thing. There's a volume dip early in the song :45-on my second listen...
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