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  1. sharonclowe

    Adding drum and bass tracks

    Hi Ido...unfortunately, no I didn't use a click track. Since this was my very first time trying to be recorded, it was too much for me to try and get used to that all at once. Since then I've made some progress in being able to stand having the clicking sound in my head...but I still hate it...
  2. sharonclowe

    Adding drum and bass tracks

    Becca does most of the lead vocals...she's practically tone deaf when it comes to trying to harmonize, so I just wait until she's learned her part and then I try adding a little harmony. I don't think we sound anything alike, but FYI...she's singing the 2nd & 3rd verses...I'm the puny voice on...
  3. sharonclowe

    Adding drum and bass tracks

    is there a plug-in for pissed off guitar sounds? I think I need that!
  4. sharonclowe

    Adding drum and bass tracks

    Here's another song I did with my daughter (just a fun little man-hatin' song :p :D) ....it was our very first time being recorded (a friend of mine brought his equipment to her apartment and set up in her living room). Does anyone want to try adding bass or drums? I don't know if that's even...
  5. sharonclowe

    Chariot (here's some lyrics to review)

    :laughings: :laughings: :laughings: yeah...sorry 'bout that ridiculous thumping!! :laughings: :laughings: :laughings: My feeble attempt at percussion...I think next time I'll just leave the bass drum kick sounds safely in my head!! I didn't do the recording though...just messed with it on the...
  6. sharonclowe

    Perpetual Rain - Opinions please!

    I tried to go back for a second listen to make sure I agree with myself...but the link keeps locking up the page for some reason?? :confused: Anyway...here's my two cents. What I liked: the groove was fun, the guitar work was nice, mix of bass/guitars/drums is fine. What I didn't like: (and...
  7. sharonclowe

    My first time recording someone else...

    Song reminds me of Beatles Rubber Soul era. I wasn't wild about the singer...something in the phrasing seemed kinda cheesy (like when he'd stretch out that note on the word "I'm"). I imagine the song might appeal to a few people, but for me it was hokey. It was very nice of you to try to help...
  8. sharonclowe

    Jokerman - Greg murders Bob Dylan

    Very fun....feels like I just stepped off a roller coaster! The original of this song (which I hadn't heard before) pales in comparison to your cover. "Rough and ugly"??....I didn't think so.
  9. sharonclowe

    Chariot (here's some lyrics to review)

    Shorter version...me learning to use Reaper Ok....after much pain and suffering I've managed to stumble through Reaper (this is my first time EVER trying to do anything like this, so while my creation might not be perfected I'm pleased that I was able to accomplish what I wanted to try). I...
  10. sharonclowe

    Ever Since It's Been Through - A new mix for all to hear

    Hi Clong....I'm probably the least qualified to comment on the mix, but I figure when people post their work on here they are looking for opinions (including profound observations offered by the experienced & educated..as well as the casual musings of a novice musician like me). The vocals are...
  11. sharonclowe

    Feedback on some songs please :)

    "The House That Spoke"....(literally)...yes the TV going in the background is messing up the soothing feel of the guitar. This is just my personal opinion, so I hope you don't take it badly, but the guitar playing becomes a little too redundant between the 2-3.5 minute mark...least it covered...
  12. sharonclowe

    Ziv - 1099

    that was.......different. I wasn't crazy about it, but neither did I dislike it. It was just a little too random/spastic for my tastes I guess. I liked the bird in the beginning....the odd crackling sounds were slightly annoying. I enjoyed the acoustic guitar section, but all the different...
  13. sharonclowe

    Anyone wanna compare some mixes?

    I definitely preferred the B versions on both songs. Your voice reminds me of Brad Arnold (Three Doors Down). The 1A song was kind of annoying (sorry :() so I was pleasantly surprised by how the 1B version started out much better (liked the piano)....I noticed though that it was a little...
  14. sharonclowe

    Psych Thing becomes The Master

    all coming together nicely! The guitar solo was perfect. The vocals sound very commanding/regal and have some nice touches of harmony. Nice work :)
  15. sharonclowe

    Psych Thing with Drums

    retarded noob finally figures out how to open the song Hi RayC...sounds good to me so far. I'm really curious to hear it with words though. I liked the drums, the bass, and the "jangly" guitar. Does have a retro feel to it, but doesn't sound tired or worn-out at all. I don't know if I'm a...
  16. sharonclowe

    please critique this singing

    Hi Seth...thanks for listening! I appreciate your sincerity. Not sure if I'm up to sliding and groaning just yet, lol...but I will certainly keep that in mind! Your post doesn't mention your website, so not sure how to find that...but you're welcome to tinker with the song if you'd like...
  17. sharonclowe

    demo - "Twilight Rain"

    I thought this sounded really great! I agree a little percussion might be a nice touch...maybe something including a delicate cymbal kind of sound? or those chimes things (lol.....as I was typing that the wind chimes came in again!!)...I was thinking of those chimes that are little silver tubes...
  18. sharonclowe

    "Monsters" with Joeym.....

    OK...getting another chance to listen without waking my family. Not sure now if maybe you've changed the initial version of the song you posted? Anyway..maybe my word choice of "treble" wasn't the correct description....but it seems the vocal (which is really good by the way) is sitting too...
  19. sharonclowe

    Stellar Girl

    sounds good...nice vocals. I liked how the ending gets more and more simple...kind of brings the listener down gently from so much going on during the song.
  20. sharonclowe

    please critique this singing

    this is my daughter and me...there are parts of this where I was really happy with the sound, and then a few parts that make my eye twitch, hahaha. If you have a chance, could you please make a notation where it sounds off to you (like the number thing. For example I think the vocals are "off"...
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