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    Serious producer, but all for fun!

    Welcome! This is not usually my kinda thing, but I do quite like this. Dark but energetic, lots of sizzle and growl. Maybe there's a tad too many of those bass drops? Not sure if they're all needed (such as the one at 1:42) Production-wise it's pretty great - loud but clear, impressive stuff...
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    Manslick The American Dream

    Yo, thanks for sharing. Overall pretty good. I don't think the bass is too loud at all. There's definitely some compression going ahead that's messing with the snare, to my ear. I also wonder if the vocals could have a little reverb or something - they're quite dry to me and don't quite blend...
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    My first submission here for your feedback

    Agree with comments that this is a good cover, nice job man. There's definitely something on the overall track that's squeezing life out of the song though - it's nearly there! Drums are pretty good for a basement recording - sounds to me like the toms could be beefed up a little, and the kick...
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    I've Made It Through the Storm"

    Hey, thanks for sharing this. To me this sounds very MIDI-heavy, but might be the effect you're going for. The mix itself sounds fine without being particularly 'spectacular'. The bassline is school. The song itself is quite stop-start in odd places (again, you might have been going for this...
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    3 post-writers block songs for the judgement of your ears

    Yo Alex, thanks a lot for your considered comments, they are much appreciated. Old Taxi - yes, interesting you should say that about the voices as I had a similar suspicion that they might be too prevalent. Relate - I think the gunshot sound you're referring to is actually a clock ticking...
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    3 post-writers block songs for the judgement of your ears

    Hi Chilli, thanks for the welcome and the feedback, much appreciated. Just to clarify, the voice in Welcome Paradox isn't mine, it's that of German filmmaker Werner Herzog -he's recounting a dream he had during an interview on the WTF podcast. I've referenced this in the actual description on...
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    3 post-writers block songs for the judgement of your ears

    Hey folks. First of all - thanks in advance. This place looks exactly like what I've been looking for by way of a community of musicians providing feedback, so I just want to say that I'm looking forward to hearing the music y'all are producing and hopefully providing you with some constructive...
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    Why Are You Sleeping?

    Howdy Jolias Just thought I'd throw some feedback your way having listened to and enjoyed your song. 1. Mix actually sounds pretty cool to me, kinda lo-fi and subtle, very nice. 2. Nothing to worry about in terms of pronunciation - all good man. 3. Melodies are real nice. Took me some time...
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    "Forgiven"

    Hi Sullivan, looks like you've already had some great feedback from everyone here already, so I'll keep this brief. And of course, just opinions. Really reminds me of listening to some classic Alter Bridge/Submersed - nice stuff. Really love it, the mix sounds pretty great overall. A couple of...
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    The Dream's Malfunction

    Howdy - just had a listen to this. Really like the general vibe of this, love how it opens up at 1.11. Initially I thought the intro guitar sounded a little too central and plain, but it works well because it contrasts so nicely with those choruses. I love the drum beat but wonder if the...
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    "Like A Butterfly" acoustic folky original

    Hey, new user here so just thought I'd share some thoughts. The guitar sounds absolutely lovely, really nice stuff. I also think the leg-slaps are great - they had a nice and subtle, yet interesting, rhythmic edge to those sections. The vocals are good, solid, and the harmonies are really...
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    Please help with my mix: Engagement Song

    Hey Alex, and everyone. New user here, so just thought I'd get involved and start offering round some feedback. Hope that's cool. First of all - what a cool and brave thing to do, proposing with one of your own songs - nice! In terms of thoughts on the mix - the guitar tones sound quite nice...
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