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ahhh man, you nailed the track. joint is hot. once you mix it i'm sure it will sound even hotter. the one thing I really noticed was the syncopation in your delivery, which is perhaps the best i've heard on this board. It's just so easy to understand.

haha yeah this is exactly the type of feedback I expected on these 2 projects. Truthfully, they were each made as more of a joke than anything at first, and should definitely not be considered hip-hop/rap (which I know I should have probably said at first). I love the niel diamond--snoop dogg...

fixed that's odd, it works for me. I'll post a direct link. Ill try to fix this. The site is www.chefrone.cjb.net

hmmm.... i guess no response is better than....no nevermind

you really know what you are doing musically. I'm a big fan of that blues-sounding track, its almost mark ronson-esque. like everyone is saying, fatten up dem ddrums

"The suns I see don't please much I gotta swallow my food carefully whenever i eat lunch" -Last Dayz, by far my favorite What a winner. did i get the first part right? unique. You really seem to have your message and lyrics down, but the delivery is lacking...

im a fan, you sound a lot like my boy young jeezy. especially with all the filler (even though the generic "uhhh" may be getting slowly phased out of hip hop). maybe turn the vocals down a touch, the beat needs some more room. but i like it.

really like cp09, sounds great.

that organ and that looming pad are cool for 16 bars or so, but they get a bit too repetitive about a quarter through the song. Perhaps change the pad so it sound a bit less like the organ, and play around with some variations on the basic melody? and, like everyones saying, the drums need to be...

wow, great beats. superb licks in the first one, mixed beautifully. Jays flow in the last one matches the beat perfectly, and the percussion is perfectly present, but not at all intrusive, really pushing the vocals to the front. awesome.

same goes for the other tracks

I really feel the beats in the first two songs, but you need to find yourself a new vocal level that mixes in better with the track. Also, there's just not enough emotion to it. It sounds a bit apathetic. Other than that I really like it.

hook me up with a listen, eh? a unique sound, need feedback Hey, I'm new to this board. I've been rapping and making beats for a few months but only recently have I decided to actually record anything. So far I've gotten positive reviews from my friends, but now im looking for some unbiased...