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i don't expect all critiques to be favourable, but i expect them to be critiques and not merely shows of disrespect as you first showed to two of us. you never offered a detailed critique you mostly just laughed and said it sucked. that's not a critique, that's merely being disrespectful. and...

her issue with it was that she heard the singer saying "your 'own' insanity" because of the way it plays with the timing a bit. i told her no that's not what he's saying but she wouldn't believe me till i took her to the studio and muted everything but the vocals :) it's his playing with the...

thanks ido :) i want to rep you but i have to spread the love around :) i can't wait until we get some harmonies going in it and get my friend from the netherlands to play some real drums on it :) this is still just a working version :)

my singer steps out of cadence on purpose. all of those words fit perfectly into the meter and cadence but if you sing insanity in time the chorus ends with a robotic feel to it, whereas stepping out of meter and cadence gives it something to change that. and of course it's full of triplets...

thanks a lot. again :) it gratifies me to know that you like it :) i appreciated the comments :)

i'm not getting into a religious discussion with you because my beliefs are none of your business. BUT. i mentioned God in my song and Hell, if you got the fire and brimstone remark as well, because for some reason, heaven and hell are frequently part of people's psychosis'. i won't get into a...

My singer wants to start practicing with a drum machine. but right now he's not working so does anyone know of a free drum program online?

if you have something to say about the performance say it. i'd like to hear what you think. if there's something in your critique that rings true with me i'll work on it or my singer will. but just vague statements that the performance doesn't measure up isn't helpful at all.

did you listen to it Ray? all of those lyrics fit fine in there. you're not the only one to mention the mine mind rhyme but what it says is more important than fixing the rhyme. here's the link http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6270551

thanks for the replies guys i appreciate your comments. we're working on harmonies next so we'll see where that takes us. so no one thought the chorus was sung too hard on the accents?

thanks for the wow :) i really appreciate it. i'm glad you like. i hope you can find time to listen. i'd like people's opinions on whether the accents on the choruses are sung too heavy.

my partner had an issue with that too. but the line fits perfectly. he's just singing the last word out of time for effect. thanks for listening :)

is there anything in the vox that needs to be done better? like i have the feeling he's hitting the accents in the chorus too hard. what do you think?

why would anyone want to critique your stuff. you belittle other people's work and have no respect. and my song isn't finished yet nor even mixed properly. what's your excuse?

here's a link to the best song i've worked on yet. http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6270551

here's the link to the unfinished song Tortured Soul. http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6270551 Let me know what you all think. and make any suggestions before saturday because we're finishing it up then :)

it's funny. you could sell it to weird al if he's still around :)

thanks shoop :) can't wait to post it for you all to have a listen :)

lol, the song is about getting it back not letting it go lol. the meter is tricky on this one. i had to really put the right words in the right place and put the accents in the proper place. also the melody in the verses changes halfway through. i like it though. those who have heard the not...

there are fewer metaphonrs in there than you think. and doctors and nurses aren't servants of madness they are the enemies of it. i like the doctors and nurses line. it does what i need it to do. :)