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  1. Stratomaster

    Consciousless Mind

    I like the sound, hmm im experiencing hiccups and stutters in the playback. I thought it was a weird gate thing but ill have to check things on my end. From what i can tell this is really well done, great sounds, performance and mix. Will try and get a better listen. edit to add-yeah directly...
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    Progeny

    Sounds very good to me. Vocals are clearer and the mix between different vocal parts sounds very tight. Drums are kind of meh, i would have verbed the snare at least, some tom rolls would help humanize things. But those are nitpicks really because i like the song and the cohesion between the...
  3. Stratomaster

    "The Spice Felange" - synthwave rock inspired by "Dune"

    Sounds good! I like the stuff going on in the verse between the guit? and synth and the smooth melody. Synth sounded a little high endy on my monitor. Vocals sound nice, when you go to the higher range the volume jumps a good bit. I was thinking the same thing about dynamics...this hits hard...
  4. Stratomaster

    Progeny

    I like the mood and groove, though i agree the snare sounds too up front. I also agree just a bit too much verb on the vocals, i would try automating it out a bit in the chorus when the other voice comes in? I think some more layering of voices could go a long way, harmonizing some of the...
  5. Stratomaster

    Ghost - dense Pink Floyd-type mix

    Sounds nice, the nylon string is a nice touch. The chord change once the singing gets going is a nice surprise. Mix wise, very listenable and well balanced, seems like i wanted to hear more of everything! I think some more guitars wouldn't hurt, the sounds and the playing are great the vocals...
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    Manslick - The Bullet's Gash

    Really interesting song right from the get-go, excellent. I thought grn's suggestions were so good i went to the mp3 and yes much better, kudos for being flexible. The bass is the really prominent now and the excellent bass riffs really drive the song for me. Really cool descending piano riffs...
  7. Stratomaster

    Thunderbird

    I like the mix, it created a party atmosphere. At first i thought the vocals were too loud but they settled in. Seems like the phrasing was rushed on the chorus, second time with the 2 vocals sounded great. Drums sound nice and real-love that ride cymbal. Guitar tone and playing is great-sounds...
  8. Stratomaster

    Lets let it go

    Greetings, here's a mix of a song that's a collaboration between me and my brother, i sent him the music and he wrote the lyrics. The mix sounds pretty good to me, i'm not getting the power i want, but turning up my stereo seems to take care of that. I laid down vocals in the hopes that one of...
  9. Stratomaster

    Blue Light - New Track - First Mix

    The reason i asked and i just checked it, this tune would fall really well with a capo on the 2nd fret. first section d-em-g-a-c etc Apologies for my continued presumptuosness :facepalm:
  10. Stratomaster

    Shattered - Hard rock original

    Interesting start to the song, could be a little more apparent imo but adds to the punch in the face you know is coming hehe. Really nice guitar parts and the way they mesh together along with a nice bass riff. The verse is really catchy, that high vocal is an excellent touch on the held notes...
  11. Stratomaster

    Mopho!

    Awesome groove to start the tune, that's a nice big bass sound to match your drums. Very powerful once the drums kick in. The change lost momentum when the tremolo didn't match tempo, or the part seems unsure, imo. Cool guitarry sound not sure what it is lol, but sounds chopped, cool sound. The...
  12. Stratomaster

    One of These Days - new original

    Really cool guitar riff, that stutter really makes the riff unique. Vocals sound great, and the performance has attitude. Jam section is nice...The mix sounds very honest sounding to me, sounds like a band doing a good performace of the tune. The guitar on the left is a bit spikey imo, but the...
  13. Stratomaster

    Blue Light - New Track - First Mix

    Love the first section, great mood with the verbs and i liked the melody. Seems like the keys and guitar could "jive" better or i hear a tuning issue, the guitar slides clash with the piano at times. Are you capo'd?. Second section, i like the change, i was imagining guitar riffs rather than the...
  14. Stratomaster

    Agony - Original hard rock...rough cut

    I thought that was AD2 since i use it also...I didn't mean to sound so specific with "high hat reverb" when they're trashy they sound fine but the closed hits i hear that smearing sound that i recognize from the ad2 room sound, it always sounds better to me before its rendered for some...
  15. Stratomaster

    "tell me why" feedback request

    Mix sounds great, i like the opening arrangement and how it works into the groove. Some things are right in the speaker some are off in the distance, the spaciousness helps to hold the interest for what is pretty much a 3 chord progression. Vocals could have been a touch clearer-they are...
  16. Stratomaster

    This was described as "Alien Sex Fiend meets Filter at a Skinny Puppy show"

    Sounds great-sounds are all distinct and the separation is nice. The mechanical drums work well. Nice guitar tones, sometimes the balance seems left heavy, theres nothing balancing that on the right side. Could be that i like symmetry. I think the mix is excellent overall, though i did have some...
  17. Stratomaster

    Agony - Original hard rock...rough cut

    Nice groove-Love the beat, guitars sound great-really jumping out of the speakers and tight playing. Bass sounds great...I think the vocals could be arranged to be sure the words are at least barely audible, the high voice obscures the lower voice that's carrying in the verses imo. The drums are...
  18. Stratomaster

    "Lightspeed"

    Sounds excellent, smooth performances all around. Very easy to listen to, love the smooth harmonies, catchy tune. As far as mix, i prefer my vocals a little farther back, i think they're perfect in the verses, but the chorus the main vocal pops out a bit too much for my taste, thats just me. I...
  19. Stratomaster

    The Dregs (Down at the Bottom)

    I loved the feel of the start of the track-the bass sounds great. Then the vocals came in-so dry and in your face, it killed that mood to me. Not that i think the singing is bad it just conflicted with the mood of the music. I think the heavy compression overall has pulled the vocal too far...
  20. Stratomaster

    Giving it a genre and sound feedback

    Cool piece, I like the way the bass register follows the melody at times and goes off on it's own at other times. Reminds me of Jan Hammer when he was with Al DiMeola which is very impressive. I think the master is pretty good-certainly loud enough. Any criticism I can think of would just be...
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