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There’s no clipping on the left side only or anywhere in the track that there is some distortion on different instruments particularly the drums. I don’t know what you’re hearing but I just listened here and I don’t hear it. Give the time stamp. There is decapitator on the piano you may be...

I added some side chain compression on the reverb to address that issue. Thanks I like it too and the length is intentional I'm tired of writing 3:30 pop songs. There is no clipping but there is a lot of saturation on the drums and in general. Some don't like that and I get it. Dave Fridman...

I hear ya I appreciate the comments there’s only one Guitar panned on the hard left. when you get a chance listen again I’ve updated the mix both wave and MP3. The current mix has an Octavia on the guitar solo. I’m talking about when the drums drop out and the vocals first come in. If you’re...

were you listening to the wav? I updated that mp3 with the latest mix I don't know what you're listening on but they are clear enough to understand here on my monitors and in my car.

updated mix. I brought the guitars on the chromatic chorus part down about 2 db they are meant to be jarring and prominent but maybe were a bit much. The vocal style is an intentional dream pop vibe I'm fine with them being slightly buried in this song.

his comment was actually before I added vocals I just updated same link with current mix. That being said I understand some people won't have the attention span for this song. It's intentionally long and soundtrackish

sounds great now! Still wish I could hear more definition/less verb on guitar especially for this genre

Thanks Mark i raised the vocals and added some harmonies going to replace drums with real drums and call this one done

sounds very similar just a lot quieter and less impact.

Thx mark i agree initial vocals could come up especially after the drums enter

added vocals finally. also reduced some hi end

backed the bass down a bit and removed some hi end.

Edit: Video (watch in 4k) new idea, obviously I need to flesh the vocals out a bit more. I wanted something long and hypnotic. There are a lot of little ear candy parts coming and going. This is not finished suggestions on anything welcome. My favorite part right now is probably the guitar...

if the reverb isn't baked in I'd back some of it off it's really hard to hear any details. Drums need to come up. you can't hear the guitar at all. Vocals sound good. sounds like you need hi pass on some tracks. Song is cool

sounds good main issue for me is the vocal phrasing/melody. It sounds like trying to fit words to music instead of singing to music if that makes sense. Piano could benefit from a better sample library if you want send piano midi to me and I'll send yah a wav using Garritan CFX

Song is really good for this genre! That's the good news. The following is my opinion on how to make it sound more professional. First the mix is veiled and sounds congested. Sounds like a blanket is over it. Listen to some Michael Jackson for a reference. Vocal Production (sibilance...

No link for me

Ok I removed the lp noise. Raised the drums added some distortion to bass. Sounds better now. Also added some delay to vocals. I'm pretty happy with it now. The argument is staying as that sets the tone for what the song is about.

the new real drums have samples behind them. I decided to have them more modern sounding

I replaced the drums with real drums and removed the telephone like vocal effects. Let me know which one you prefer.