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    Inspired by John The Evangelist for Easter

    It's good for being fake. It's "overly clean" - a bit sterile sounding. What is a "mumble track?"
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    May Angels Guide

    In general this sounds really good. Great parts on just about all the instruments. The percussion is definitely loud. Is it too loud? Probably not. I will say that there are words here and there that get lost behind a snare hit. So maybe pull it down a db or so. It'll still be very...
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    Bad Blood -Mix 2 with vox- (remastered)

    Love that guitar sound on the left. Love the grit in it. The clean guitar on the right is nice too. The vocal level seems to jump a couple dbs at about 1:20. Drums are OK. I might pull the kick back a couple of dbs. I might pull down the low end of the bass just a bit. Overall, it's real...
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    Outrageous (about domestic abuse)

    I'll add another vote for pulling the lead vocal down just a bit. Additionally it's quite a bit dryer than the other tracks. I think that's causing it to stick out more as well. I liked the double tracking on parts of it. Great rhythm sounds on this. Love that arrangement. Cool sounding...
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    For those interested, the workflow for the recording of my “Alan Parsons Project” inspired track.

    I thought it sounded nice. I'm guessing that's Sonor on the computer in the video? The visuals look really different from when I used it. Anyway, I thought it sounded nice.
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    First electronic instrumental music. feedback is appreciated

    I'm not anything close to an expert in this genre. I thought there was some cool stuff going on throughout the song. That helps keep up listener interest - which can be difficult in an instrumental. I would imagine a strong kick is important in this genre. But you may have gone a couple of...
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    Ahhh Chirbuli!

    Guitars have an excellent metal sound. Great energy and very well played - all the parts: rhythm/riffs/lead... Balance on things is pretty good. Vocals might come up a half-db or so maybe? I like the low end where it is. So I'm guessing a few people will think it should be a bit stronger...
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    You just showed you are qualified - you were the only one who caught that low end problem.
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    Thanks for the second listen. And thanks for catching that problem.
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    OK I'm not 100% sure I hear what you're talking about. But I *think* what you're hearing is in the rhythm during the riffs. I lined some guitar stabs up to the grid with stretch markers. I also made some slight modifications to the drum pattern in those spots. Is that at least partially...
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    Thanks @OSHC and @Bulls Hit . Appreciate the listens.
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    "Blame" (Caution: Woke)

    I thought everything on this sounded excellent. Vocals sounded real good. A bit of a strange reverb/delay on it. Seems stereo, and I'd prefer a mono reverb chain on it. Clean guitars sounded real nice and were very well played. The bass had a little grit on it that I liked. Nice use of...
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    Thanks for the clarification. I'll probably keep it the way it is.
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    Thanks @Papanate I'm not hearing the "off-beat-ness" that you're hearing. That's how it's supposed to be I guess? Not sure. But thanks.
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    @BTStudio - thanks for the comments. Glad you liked the song and the guitars. Let me give a close listen to the low and see if I can hear what you're hearing. You could very well be right. @Thekesslerboy - Glad you liked it and thanks for the suggestions. I might raise the doubled vocal...
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    Hot Soccer Mom

    I posted this one a few years back. This is a new mix. I retracked parts of the intro because I didn't like the original performances. Also added a high harmony part. Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance. Mix #1 Mix #2
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    New song: Get It Out. (Accidental ska song!)

    I forgot to say that. It didn't seem ska to me. I really liked it, but it didn't seem ska. FWIW
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    New song: Get It Out. (Accidental ska song!)

    I love the feel of this. It's great. Love the energy. Really like the song. Excellent vocal performance. Vocals sound great. But too much reverb. And whatever you doing with the stereo/delay/reverb/panned double tracks... Didn't care for that. I like the lead vocal entirely down the...
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    Rock On v2

    I think @Papanate an @DM60 have some excellent observations. The only thing I can add is that there is a pitchy note or two in the vocal. And that doubled guitar that comes in at 2:06 is killer.
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    In the Garden

    The vocal sound is nice and clear. I didn't really catch the mistakes you're talking about. Snare sound is decent. The kick gets covered by the bass guitar to an extent. Cymbals have a "sterile" sound to them. The bass has a ton of low end that makes it sound rumbly. The guitar sounds are...
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