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Much better. I am 70.5 years old. This song is in my DNA. You have gotten better. The arrangement is great. Yes - your attempt to reach the notes is honest. If you want to be a singer then you got to get out of your comfort zone. I mean, sing in a bar. Let it rip. This isn't bad. But you'll...

Hi Scott. The guitar on the left is rude. The bass comes and goes. Drums are almost rude. It's a wall of sound. The concept is good. Vocals should be louder or more present. Hard to tell what is in front. Kind of like a kid band where all of us are fighting for focus. Good song.

Well not entirely true. For this one, about the hoot owl, I did do a stream of consciousness, sing and play session the other day. Maybe I will post that.

I don't have a song structure at this point. Lyrics and words come to mind so I type them here to keep them organized. I always, 95% of the time start a song with words. Then come up with the music later. For me it's easier to write words than music. Thanks Irwin.

What is "Rand heal" ?

People talking to themselves or padding their post count.

I do have a string story. Way back when I lived on So. Pky I had a Retriever puppy. I had changed the strings and wound them up tight, like I do and dropped them in the trash. A bit later I heard the dog gagging and saw him come out the kitchen with the ends of the strings dangling out his...

Thanks. Might drop by there today.

Words are a bit indistinct during the louder parts. Overall mix sounds well balanced to me.

Just wondering if it's going to fly apart some day. Been like this for over 50 years.

Or not?

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thoughts into lyrics. green bean. a girl I seen looked toward me again green bean the girl I seen is gone so I seen a green bean girl I said it to my mother mother looked at me and said "I know, - my little boy" but mother.. "slow your roll my little boy you not even a teen" I wriggled I...

I know, you want song form. Hit song - toe sucking fans. Or poets who play. Big song. Big. Catchy - funny - bright - Current. "Colloquial?" , She said in the slow, low sun set and you nodded yes. How could you not? When her brown eyes, so earnest. Looked you up. I saw you agree in soliloquy...

my last song should be enough to cement me in the record of the willing and rows of the dead no word has ever been written like mine, she said so I look up from my feet and smile oh, you too? I say "It must be catching, I quaked my world this morning" 'news reel dispatching' she smiles again...

Wall of sound too much. Great song.

Well hell I'll spin it again

all good up in here

Intus Ubique is glorious. Excellent mix and musicianship. Really nice chord changes.

Plods along well. Raspy vocals are a lot like Tom Waits. I get this is kind of a dirge. What happened?