Recent content by tsitalon1

Thankyou so much...I am trying to improve on this latest song...I *might* decide to perform it live:eek:

Newest song, please be honest not cruel:D Song is here: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/RiseandFall_James4.3.mp3?attredirects=0

Hey Jen, I really appreciate your feedback. Honestly, I thought "Easy" was one my best...:D Thanks for bringing me back to reality:rolleyes: Yeah the acapella was a Craig David song titled "don't love you no more (I'm Sorry)". It was way to fast, I am working on my own slower version now...

bump me :)

Thanks guys! I have more for your torture...umm...I mean enjoyment. Easy: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/Easy4.mp3?attredirects=0 Don't love you no more (acapella): http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/I%27m_sorry.mp3?attredirects=0

I have no idea what your saying in that song:D but that doesn't matter, I woould love to take a shot at it. Do you have it in a pro tools session? Did you create all of this or just the vocals? You can send it to me through the usendit.com service for free to my email address --> tsitalon1 @...

If you could get it to me in Pro tools format I could mix it...I need mixing practice anyway.

Try the link 3 posts above your's.

Will do, thanks for the comments, I do have several covers I've done with alot of vibrato...especially EASY by Lionel Richie :) On the intonation, I do hear where I'm off, though usually it "feels" right as I'm signing. I do hear it afterwards during the review. I have contacted a vocal coach...

Breath is not bad, I feel it adds a rawness to it...you could always remove the breath sounds with a de-breather plug-in you wanted... try a "touch" of reverb an/or delay on the vocals as well, you might really like it.

try this: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/03Smooth.mp3?attredirects=0

I like version 2 MUCH better. The vocals really punch through. Sounds like you have compression and maybe some slight reverb on it... much brighter than version 1. my .02

Jen, Thank you for your positive comments. I actually do not like my tone. I have found that I can produce several diffent tones, and the one I like the best (breathy) is VERY difficult ot maintain. I do know that the breathy tone is not preferred, but it *sounds* best *to me* LOL That song was...

I truely appreciate your comments and I believe you guys are right. Some tracks I perform do feel mechanical because I am so worried about intonation and tone. Again, I have only been recording for 8 months, I have come a LONG way since I started trust me :) I believe that once I feel...

Thanks, trueverb and supertap.