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    First song I’ve written, thanks to a workshop

    Very nice. I love putting my cans on and listening to other folks here, so inspiring. Good tune.
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    Original Song

    Very good stuff. Good guitar playing and I like the lyrics too. My goodness, of course you should let her hear it, she will really like it.
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    Just popped into my head

    I have heard that even Bob Dylan used to pattern his songs after other songs he loved from other artists. He would change a chord here and there, alter the melody and next thin you know, he has a song. There is no problem having a sound similar to other great songs. I mean, there are only so...
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    Oars up

    Very cool. "to haul on frosted ropes", I love that line and it made me think of the fishing show in Alaska, damn, can't recall what that show was called now. Good stuff.
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    I have writers block, uhg

    Here are 3 more. Thanks for the help and comments, folks. I am now going to break out my Sony 7506 cans and listen to some other works here for inspiration.
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    I have writers block, uhg

    I did read your post and really liked it as well as the others. I really didn't mean I was feeling stuck as far as lyrics, I was more talking of melodies and interesting and varied changes. One point above I loved, "MORE INTERESTING CHORDS" That is absolutely true. I have a wonderful book of...
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    I have writers block, uhg

    Good points, thank you. I ave written and recorded like 85 songs are so and I have only been happy with a few of them. Yes, I think inspiration would be helped greatly if I could find someone to write with and someone I could record. I find I am now, after all these years, just as interested...
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    I have writers block, uhg

    Or is it that I am LAZY AS HELL??? Probably both. I want to write but nothing comes out. I have written many songs, but I am terrible at song structure, and dreadful at singing. Here are a couple I wrote a few years ago. I am playing everything other than the drums, which are loopws. I...
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    The jam that never was

    Maybe this should have been "The Post that never was", lol. I don't get the point of this post, please explain. Seems like wasted typing. I could be missing some obvious meaning, however.
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    Wrote a song about getting older

    I always have trouble with mixing and song structure. This is about losing options as you get older until you wonder if you are in control of your own path or if your path is now controlling you. i hate my own voice, jeez I hear so many good recordings and songs here so I feel a bit...
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