This is such a killer song. I think this approach is great! Just curios, what genre is this? Didn't find it unusual , that's why I asked.
Love your guitar sound, I think this is great, does the original justice for sure!
This is nice. Hypnotic. Not familiar with trip-hop, but it's not strange to my ears. Not sure I'm quite crazy about the drum sound - the snare in particular.
2.33 -3.10ish, don't hate it but you're losing the vocal. If you want that much volume change, maybe a dynamic eq sidechained to the vocal might help it cut through (or perhaps something like trackspacer if you have it).