Typing as I listen. Just woke up, mind you.
There's a little cloudiness in the lead vocal. There's a few timing issues between the bass and kick that are more on the obvious side, I think.
Jangly distorted guitars sound real good. OH's and snare are nice. The rimshot has little effect, it's kinda "blippy"/"thuddy". Is there a cut on the vocals in the 2-5khz range? They seem a little dull, no presence.
The vocals are the biggest issue, for me. But, I'm searching out things, I suppose.