Ain't got you by Alicia Keys sung by Ellise 15 at my Aunt's wedding

[ellisek]

 

[ido1957]

I give it a C+. Your pitch is all over the place. It sounds ok for a few phrases then you lose it.
You also tend to slide up to the the note rather than nail it right away.
You could blame some of it on the lack of proper monitoring, I suppose, or lack of practice/memorization.

 

[andrushkiwt]

I give it a C+. .

Agree. Lots of work needed, but the tone is there. I'm sure the environment wasn't ideal, as IDO mentioned. Lots of sliding, like he said too. I didn't hear much chest/power in the louder sections, like you were holding back a tad and it made it difficult to reach those higher notes with conviction and persuasion.

 

[ellisek]

Yes I did this live at my Aunts wedding. I believe you never stop learning or improving