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Dario Rigon

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Hi guys! My latest production.
Back to the stars!

Made with FL STUDIO 11
I did lyrics, voice, composition, and the video. (like... forever alone:D)
Hope you enjoy and point at me aaaall the problems.



Thankyou :)
 
Dario, there's a small syntax problem with the lyrics. No big deal but it gives the impression of singing in a second language.
Tne music seems fine - the mix is pretty good.
Did you use autotune or something similar on the vocals? They sound over processes in some places which is popular at present but isn't entirely pleasant.
 
Good Job,

Overall nice mix, catchy tune. I agree the vocal could have better clarity, it would help the hook in the tune.
 
Dario, there's a small syntax problem with the lyrics. No big deal but it gives the impression of singing in a second language.
Hey racy, I notice that Dario lists his location as Italy, so maybe he is sing in a second language.
 
Hi guys! Yep, english is not my first language and i blame myself for the errors, i m trying to improve both grammar and pronunciation :)
About the vocals, yeah, some kind of autotuning there. Next time i will try to "take" enough takes until is good without it :D
thanks for the comments! i know what i have to work on with!
 
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