Noire Poetry

[Killah_Trakz]

Hope enjoy the poetry



I Just also wanted to say the new IK comps kicks ass.

 

[robgreen]

This is superb, I love your sound. Really enjoyed it trakz.

 

[Dr.SpringReverb]

Really nice track

 

[heatmiser]

Well done. Drums and piano sound great together. Good delivery and good capture on the vocals.

On your other tracks there was always something going on that threw me off, but this one sounds great to me all around.

 

[rayc]

The reference to a jewel in raw form gives a mixed message - most are barely recognisable until cleaned, ground & cut. Phrases such as "a diamond in the rough" are usually in reference to hidden, latent or obscured brilliance.
Nevertheless, pretty tidy production - the voice is much clearer after the change at about 2mins. The refernce to garments & compartments seems a little materialistic (pun intended).
I don't really get the "noire" reference. Is it in terms of cinematics, german expressionsism or race? You did use the feminine spelling of the word so it could be construed as an adjective describing a female - BUT, I don't know.
As I said = nicely put together sound wise.

 

[dobro]

I'm glad to say it's good. I'd be happy to have stuff like this coming out of my operation. I'd bring up the level of the chorus vocals though. They sound good. Bring 'em up.

You could even have taken more time on the outro and faded. It's good stuff.

 

[Killah_Trakz]

This is superb, I love your sound. Really enjoyed it trakz.

Thanks alot, im still trying to figure out my own sound.

Really nice track

Your welcome.

Well done. Drums and piano sound great together. Good delivery and good capture on the vocals.

On your other tracks there was always something going on that threw me off, but this one sounds great to me all around.

Let me know what exactly threw you off so i can further investigate.

I'm glad to say it's good. I'd be happy to have stuff like this coming out of my operation. I'd bring up the level of the chorus vocals though. They sound good. Bring 'em up.

You could even have taken more time on the outro and faded. It's good stuff.

Dobro, add me to your operation. I know I have the means I just need help to get their.

Once again I want to say thanks to those who listened and commented.